Cover- Prologue
- Exposition, but none of it is important!
- I fanboy Dio; you still miss nothing important
- Literally none of this exposition is relevant, actually!
- Meet Generic Edgelord and Generic Edgelord's Imouto!
- Let's make Generic Edgelord quote Ninjago! Nobody'll notice!
- "Wait, what's the White Dragon again?" -You
- Meet the furries.
- Introduction of an character-non-character
- Attack on Titan cameo, who will notice? (EVERYONE, BAKA!)
- An impossible-to-follow conversation
- The "Smoking a Pipe" Syndrome
- The Sanic Disruptor
- There's a thing called Kana, y'know?
- Is this a novel or something?
- SO EDGY!!
- When you learn to write from Star Wars EU comics.
- Is this... CHARACTER BUILDING?!
- Chekhov puts down the gun... and leaves it there.
- Duplication, PART 1
- Duplication, PART 2
- Obi-Wan makes a cameo
- Fake Stakes
- Lobby of duplicated layers
- Meet the Furry's kids! (Feat. One Neo Eon)
- Meet discount Takahashi Ichiro furry!
- Meet armoured tank one-man riot squad furry!
- Meet nicotine furry!
- 9+10=21
- Male furry fingers male furry between the legs
- Bad setting up of plot threads
- I find you lack of investment disturbing.
- April Fools | IT IS I, DIO!!
- 3 material, 2 sticks, pickaxe.
- Nicotine Furry takes a smoke
- Bad panel layouts
- ブーム！
- glub
- DA SWIRLY PORTAL THINGY! (Feat. One Neo Eon)
- Terepouto
- The Isekai Part
- Generic Edgelord's Imouto's Generic Edgy Monologue
- In which I learn what Katakana is.
- Meet Exposition Man
- The guard can deal with anything except for petty thieves.
- Game of Thr*nes: Article 13 is Coming. FEAT. Anime ASMR RP
- Takahashi Ichiro Furry quotes Eddie Murphy
- Where is the dragon? Who is the dragon? WHY is the dragon?!
- Riot Squad Furry: DESTROYED WITH FACTS AND LOGIC
- Jumping here and here and here and here and here!
- Grey Lumps... BRAAAAANNNNNNGGGGG!!!
- CHALLENGE TO YOU, the reader!
- Your room is BAD CG!!
- ANOTHER impossible to follow conversation?!
- We're in the Endgam* now.
- 100?!
- Oh hey there's gore now
- Static
- Generic Edgelord's Furry Host Body DIES!
- Did you know? Grey doesn't exist!
- In which the inciting incident happens.
- 100 SUB SPECIAL: I redraw a page!
- Mr. Lucas, you think YOUR exposition's too much? THAT'S CUTE
- THE SKY! THE BUSHES OF LOVE!!
- Attack on Physics: Where are you?
- MORE EXPOSITION?!
- FINALLY! We get characters, not cardboard!
- And that's the final page.
- An open letter to all readers of Ice & Scales.
- ???
- It's been 1 year!
- MASTERMIND: Cover
- "Oh Lord My God..."
- SHIIIIIIIIZAAAAAAAAAA and Eggfest!
- Your face is off model.
- LORD MASTERMIND: Literally the scummiest boss in the galaxy.
- Is this... character or exposition?!
- Meet another discount Ichiro Takahashi!
- Use your appositives correctly, IDIOT!
- Contrived...?
- Space tablet
- I-it's not like this page is decent, B-BAKA!!
- Ripoff Death Star hallway
- S'rednas Llib
- Anyone remember Yuu Watase's shonen manga?
- >STRESS EATING!!!<
- I did not draw this page.
- This tension is tensionless.
- Trump, Nasa killer and space pirate captain.
- RIP The screentone budget
- In which I draw myself in...?
- Coming soon.
I HATE MY WORK AND WHY YOU SHOULD TOO!
When you learn to write from Star Wars EU comics.
-
Cover
-
Prologue
-
Exposition, but none of it is important!
-
I fanboy Dio; you still miss nothing important
-
Literally none of this exposition is relevant, actually!
-
Meet Generic Edgelord and Generic Edgelord's Imouto!
-
Let's make Generic Edgelord quote Ninjago! Nobody'll notice!
-
"Wait, what's the White Dragon again?" -You
-
Meet the furries.
-
Introduction of an character-non-character
-
Attack on Titan cameo, who will notice? (EVERYONE, BAKA!)
-
An impossible-to-follow conversation
-
The "Smoking a Pipe" Syndrome
-
The Sanic Disruptor
-
There's a thing called Kana, y'know?
-
Is this a novel or something?
-
SO EDGY!!
-
When you learn to write from Star Wars EU comics.
-
Is this... CHARACTER BUILDING?!
-
Chekhov puts down the gun... and leaves it there.
-
Duplication, PART 1
-
Duplication, PART 2
-
Obi-Wan makes a cameo
-
Fake Stakes
-
Lobby of duplicated layers
-
Meet the Furry's kids! (Feat. One Neo Eon)
-
Meet discount Takahashi Ichiro furry!
-
Meet armoured tank one-man riot squad furry!
-
Meet nicotine furry!
-
9+10=21
-
Male furry fingers male furry between the legs
-
Bad setting up of plot threads
-
I find you lack of investment disturbing.
-
April Fools | IT IS I, DIO!!
-
3 material, 2 sticks, pickaxe.
-
Nicotine Furry takes a smoke
-
Bad panel layouts
-
ブーム！
-
glub
-
DA SWIRLY PORTAL THINGY! (Feat. One Neo Eon)
-
Terepouto
-
The Isekai Part
-
Generic Edgelord's Imouto's Generic Edgy Monologue
-
In which I learn what Katakana is.
-
Meet Exposition Man
-
The guard can deal with anything except for petty thieves.
-
Game of Thr*nes: Article 13 is Coming. FEAT. Anime ASMR RP
-
Takahashi Ichiro Furry quotes Eddie Murphy
-
Where is the dragon? Who is the dragon? WHY is the dragon?!
-
Riot Squad Furry: DESTROYED WITH FACTS AND LOGIC
-
Jumping here and here and here and here and here!
-
Grey Lumps... BRAAAAANNNNNNGGGGG!!!
-
CHALLENGE TO YOU, the reader!
-
Your room is BAD CG!!
-
ANOTHER impossible to follow conversation?!
-
We're in the Endgam* now.
-
100?!
-
Oh hey there's gore now
-
Static
-
Generic Edgelord's Furry Host Body DIES!
-
Did you know? Grey doesn't exist!
-
In which the inciting incident happens.
-
100 SUB SPECIAL: I redraw a page!
-
Mr. Lucas, you think YOUR exposition's too much? THAT'S CUTE
-
THE SKY! THE BUSHES OF LOVE!!
-
Attack on Physics: Where are you?
-
MORE EXPOSITION?!
-
FINALLY! We get characters, not cardboard!
-
And that's the final page.
-
An open letter to all readers of Ice & Scales.
-
???
-
It's been 1 year!
-
MASTERMIND: Cover
-
"Oh Lord My God..."
-
SHIIIIIIIIZAAAAAAAAAA and Eggfest!
-
Your face is off model.
-
LORD MASTERMIND: Literally the scummiest boss in the galaxy.
-
Is this... character or exposition?!
-
Meet another discount Ichiro Takahashi!
-
Use your appositives correctly, IDIOT!
-
Contrived...?
-
Space tablet
-
I-it's not like this page is decent, B-BAKA!!
-
Ripoff Death Star hallway
-
S'rednas Llib
-
Anyone remember Yuu Watase's shonen manga?
-
>STRESS EATING!!!<
-
I did not draw this page.
-
This tension is tensionless.
-
Trump, Nasa killer and space pirate captain.
-
RIP The screentone budget
-
In which I draw myself in...?
-
Coming soon.
Self-published on CANVAS.
Creator
READS RIGHT TO LEFT This is BAD DIALOG. It mimics the stiff style of early 90's comic book writing, full of exposition and clunkiness. If you want a specific book who's example you should avoid, may I turn you attention to Star Wars: Crimson Empire 2, Council of Blood. It's not bad, but it's not good by any means, and certainly does not deserve to be anybody's point of reference.
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