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I HATE MY WORK AND WHY YOU SHOULD TOO!

Mr. Lucas, you think YOUR exposition's too much? THAT'S CUTE

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Creator's note Shonen Bag | 少年バッグ

READS RIGHT TO LEFT You know you have a BIG problem when the most major plot point happened and after 60-some pages of exposition, you STILL need a character to explain it to you, only relegating his emotions ("I won!") to a small, insignificant line at the end when in fact it should have been the most important part of the page and all the explaining should have happened on PAGE ONE.

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