reminder this is open to criticisms, this is supposed to be a pilot
i read the last criticisms. we did in fact double checked on the dialogue and got the dialogue guy in the comic since the last chapter the dialogue was bad since i wrote it... and we tried to fix some other errors in the comic.
update: fixed grammar but feel free to comment errors
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reminder this is open to criticisms, this is supposed to be a pilot i read the last criticisms. we did in fact double checked on the dialogue and got the dialogue guy in the comic since the last chapter the dialogue was bad since i wrote it... and we tried to fix some other errors in the comic. update: fixed grammar but feel free to comment errors
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