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oh boy, looking forward to feedback on this one. I maneuvered around the more technical gun talk, haha. Kel and Malik are such technical people, so this ended up super dialogue heavy (hopefully still interesting/not overwhelming?). I'm also hoping it still feels natural feels in character (I think it does, but let me know if anything feels unnatural).
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