This was definitely one of the parts of the beginning that I felt I should be a little more clear about. I felt like I was trying a bit too hard to keep that night mysterious without giving readers enough to chew on. I also was originally planning on him actually being on probation, but I decided it would be too much extra stuff to add in.
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This was definitely one of the parts of the beginning that I felt I should be a little more clear about. I felt like I was trying a bit too hard to keep that night mysterious without giving readers enough to chew on. I also was originally planning on him actually being on probation, but I decided it would be too much extra stuff to add in.
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